Monday, 26 November 2018

Running Order

Part One:
Opening sequence- Liams story edited to look like its being displayed on a television. -This morning interviews, BBC News and other news stations (Liam Alan Teenager Liam Alan… A university student and then Eamon Holes “But you must be outraged… (voice echoes) and the tile is revealed. ‘Evidence Withheld” 

Shots of normal everyday people being observed (those people are our contributors who we find out later ) with voiceover. vo/ Everyone has the right to a fair trial, but just how fairly treated do you think you would be if like me, you were falsely accused of something you didn’t do. As a result of my trial, and other high profile trials, all rape prosecutions are now being reviewed. But why is this…? Many people who have been in similar situations to me have reached out, and I want to know why it is being ignored by the people who refuse to accept responsibility.”

I went to meet with Eddie, someone who served 18 years in prison for not only a crime he didn’t commit, but one that never existed.

Listening to Eddie and the way he talked about support from his sister made me think, how do wrongful convictions affect the families involved. I know my mother was devastated in my trial and had to question even herself (flashback to this morning interview). Jan, mother of two lost both her sons to incarceration after being found guilty for a crime they didn’t commit, one of which had less than 10% visibility (blind). I went to speak with Jan who took me to visit her sons in prison.





Part Two:

Opens with “previously…. Clips of the last episode ending on meeting children in prison”


Liam speaks to the Charity ‘Centre for Criminal Appeals’ to get an insight into their work and the people they support- Speaks to someone who is supported by the charity. 

Liam then speaks to Mark, someone who made something good of being falsely accused. After having his lawyer leave him high and dry, he was left to defend and represent himself in court. He did his research and came out innocent. He was told he had a natural talent and should train to be a lower and is now doing so. He came from a bad upbringing and has turned his life around- a success story. 

To get a more conclusive insight into evidence and the technical side, Liam speaks to an expert of Evidence (DNA evidence potentially) to get a detailed explanation. Also speaks to the CCPS?

Disclaimer* Before understanding the journey we will give the police a right of reply to any statements or questions made against them.* 

Graphics shown in-between, Our angle will be undersign the system and cases where it has failed many people We want to show people the side to Britain judicial system we don’t see. Its not just America. The Key Focus Here is DISCLOSURE

Sunday, 25 November 2018

Platform



I researched into getting your content on Netflix and came across a sight called Desktop Documentaries. They gave me this information

Unless your film project has major notoriety (because it played at a major festival or has ginormous buzz) Netflix prefers that you utilize an established distributor or aggregator.

The reason for this is simple. Netflix is as a premium subscription channel similar HBO or Showtime. They pay a licensing fee for any content they are interested in. And most of the deals are negotiated between Netflix and the distributor or aggregator.

Here are few simple steps to get you started:


Step 1 – Refine Your Pitch For Netflix

Because nearly every filmmaker dreams of getting a Netflix deal, there
is an oversupply of content. To rise above the noise, your first step
is to refine your pitch even before start looking for an aggregator or
distributor.


Here are some questions to help you refine your pitch:

What's in it for Netflix to pick up your film? Does your film focus on
a popular subject, populated with thought leaders in the space? Does
it have a strong social media following? Is your film getting a ton of
press? Was your film featured in a major film festival like Sundance
or SXSW?

Once you answer these questions, you can start your hunt for an
aggregator or distributor.



Step 2 – Find An Aggregator or Distributor


Once you have a strong pitch that showcases the value of your film,
your next step is to partner with a distributor or aggregator capable
of making the pitch. These entities will first evaluate your film
internally to determine if your film (and your pitch) has a good shot
at getting picked up. The distributor or aggregator will either
decline your film internally or they will make the pitch to Netflix.


Step 3 – Get A Response

If your film gets pitched to Netflix, it will take a few weeks to get
a response. If Netflix is interested, they will negotiate directly
with your distributor or aggregator. From there, the delivery process
begins. (You will need to provide your distributor or aggregator with
all the necessary video files and artwork.)

One important point to make... It is possible Netflix will want
worldwide rights. If this happens, you will need to find some vendors to
create subtitles and localized artwork.

If Netflix is passed on the opportunity to pick up your film, you
usually won't get a lot of feedback. Do not take this personally.
Perhaps Netflix picked up a similar film last week. Or perhaps the
acquisition team is focused on other genres.

While we are on the subject of subscription video on demand (SVOD), it
may behoove you to check out Amazon Prime. The service is similar to
Netflix in the sense that subscribers can view anything in the Prime
ecosystem. But unlike Netflix, Prime does not pay licensing fee. You
are actually paid based on hours viewed.

Friday, 23 November 2018

Locations



University of Manchester
Renold's Building
Altrincham St
Manchester
M1 7JA       




Manchester University is where Liam Allan will be giving his speech about his charity Innovation of Justice. This will be a big event which we feel like we will need to film for coverage or clips during voiceovers or an intro/ ending. 

We were initially going to take the train however that would have been around 70 pounds one way and that was with railcard discount. So we have decided to drive up as a full tank of premium fuel (premium will last longer than regular) is 58 pounds. Our workings out were 2x70 for the railcard traveler and 2x 99 for the non-railcard traveler as well as overnight accommodation as to get there on the same day as we left the time would have to be about 3am and trains do not run at this time. This would total at around 408 pounds as opposed to worst case scenario two tanks of petrol and over night accommodation costing 186 pounds, which only equates to 73 pounds per person. 






 Royal Courts of Justice


The royal courts of justice was a location in which we were considering interviewing a barrister or judge on their opinions of evidence disclosure mishandling evidence and incompetence in general regarding the police. However we reached out to a prosecution barrister Jerry Hayes and he said he was willing to be interviewed on the subject and after a few conversations he suggested his place of work, the New Temple Chambers as a possible location for the interview.






New Temple Chambers, Holborn Gate, 330 High Holborn, London WC1V 7QT


We have been here previously visited one of the contributors Jerry Hayes here. It was an office set up and would have been a suitable place for an interview however due to his close connection to our presenter Liam Allan and given the fact he would be another male contributing to this documentary we decided it was best to not keep him. 










 New Scotland Yard, Victoria Embankment, SW1A 2JL 

If we are able to attain a contributor from The Met then we may film their interview outside this building. It is a popular place for news crew to shoot breaking stories about developments in- aw/ policing affairs. 

A problem with the exterior of this location would be the traffic noise and possible wind on mics. To counteract this we would use clip mics or request an interior interview. 


















 
IntaForensics, The Courtyard, Eliot Business Park Nuneaton, Warwickshire CV10 7RJ

IntaForensics since its inception in 2006, has grown to provide the widest spectrum of Digital Forensic and Cyber Security Services from its headquarters in Warwickshire. We are one of the fastest growing Digital Forensic Services provider in the UK with National coverage.






Jan Cunliffe Home
Due to privacy/ confidentiality reasons I cannot post Jan Cunliffe's address on here, however I can say that she lives in Cheshire. We will be filming her in her living room where there will plenty of natural light as well as plug sockets for atificial lighting






The Forensic Institute, 166 Buchanan St, Glasgow G1 2LW

After speaking with Professor Allan Jamieson he said that he would be more than happy to take part in our documentary and that we could film his interview in his office/ labs in Glasgow.


Doctors Surgery


Eddie Gilfoyle House










Tuesday, 20 November 2018

Simon Notes for final idea - notes

Sheffield doccumentary film festival - would it be appropriate?

Make sure to have a woman involved - balanced

Research how to budget, raise more externally? wheres the money going? Any points that we cannot comprimise on momey? DETAILED

DIRECTORS STATEMENT IS HUGE - Reason behind every choice on Everything

Are there any crime festivals? Any online portals? Any charities we could submit to it?

Reprieved.org.uk - Clive Stafford Smith



Contributors - script - Directors statement 




Sunday, 18 November 2018

possible contributors

Metropoliton Police Chief - Cressida Dick 










Criminal Defense Barrister -

















Digital Forensics 

Thursday, 1 November 2018

Chat with simon - notes

Have digital technologies allowed such cases to come to frouishion.

compare to seventies - would they have gotten away with it?

statistics of crimes/ conviction over last 50/60 years

DIGITAL FOOTPRINT - LOOK INTO TECHNOLOGY WITH POLICE - not like hand written letters with specialist on ghand wrioting 


A text message that could change someones life is admissable as evidence, how is this fair?








Citizens solving own crimes

Tuesday, 30 October 2018

Directors Statement


Below are some steps i found online that i will be looking at to help me write my statement



what exactly is a director’s statement?

Where a screenwriter might be asked to provide a synopsis for the script so that interested parties can gain a better understanding into the writer’s mind, a director might be asked for a written proposal of his vision for a film. It’s the director’s interpretation of the script, and the leading tool in its production.

This could include the technical aspects of a film, such as framing and focus, as well as the practical ones–i.e. the film’s budget. But it’s not as daunting as it sounds, and is actually quite fun to write.
Who reads it, and why?

So who asks for a director’s statement? Well, it depends. If your film has not yet been made, and consists only of the writer’s script, you could be applying for funds or grants from funding bodies to cover your proposed film budget. Perhaps you’re kickstarting a campaign for the same reason. Or maybe you’re submitting your project idea to a competition.

Whatever the case you’ll probably have been asked for a director’s statement. Sometimes directors even use a statement to send to their cast, just to get them in a similar mindset. Mostly, this is to give people the information as to how, as a director, you plan to make the scriptwriter’s idea come alive.

If, on the other hand, your film has already been made, and you’re pushing it into a festival run, your statement might be needed for one of two reasons. One, so that parts of it (such as synopsis, logline or your objective as a director) might be included as part of your film’s summary, or two, it might be used as part of a press pack, so say that your film was a runner up/winner, you wouldn’t need to be as thoroughly interviewed a you would have been had reporting bodies not been sent your statement already. They could report on your film using your statement as a reliable source.



How long does it have to be?

Usually no longer than one side of A4. It needs to be brief and to the point. Remember, the statement is used as reference, and people won’t want to skim through an entire essay. So make sure not to go over the required word count, especially if specifically stated in the guidelines you’re adhering to, which are usually strict about length/word count. Here your summary skills will be called onto, as information is key.


What goes inside?

Story

It’s always good to set up the premise of your film.

What is the story about? Here you can give away the main synopsis in a few sentences. You can talk about your main character, his or her dilemma, and the stakes of your story.

Also, What genre does it belong to? And the time period? Is it a modern-day horror? A fantasy-adventure film set in the desert? A mystery thriller neo-noir film that makes you feel just a little bit sick to the stomach? (That’s looking at you, Oldboy)

You can also talk about the film’s genesis. To what do you owe the idea’s origins and why do you identify with it?

Themes

What is the main theme of your film? Every film has got one, so think carefully! Even if you’re not sure, this is a good time to read through the script again with a critical eye. Are you going to be representing loneliness? Exploring an existential dilemma? Is it a man versus nature epic? Are you weaving a tale of revenge?

There will probably be a lot more underlying themes in your film, and these make up the subtext section of your project. You don’t have to touch on them all! Just the ones you think relevant.



Vision

As a director, you’ll have thought about the visual style, the aesthetics your film will adopt, and the visual choices you make that will complement the scriptwriter’s theme.

This can include anything from editing choices to production design, but whatever you include, make sure it stands out. What are your colour choices? Do the colours you’re going to use represent the themes you’re trying to evoke to the audience? So cold colours (greys, blues) to evoke isolation or warm tones for an idyllic feel? Will they match actors’ costumes?

Talk about your framing and focus, how you’re going to film, what mood or special effects you want to use, really anything visually important you want to include to show your project’s unique voice. This could also be technical difficulties you expect to or have faced throughout production.



Purpose

If you’re writing this in application of funding, it can’t hurt for you to write what exact purpose you want the funding for. Do you already have a budget that lays out each expenditure you’ll need? You could give a quick overview as to what purpose your funding will serve. Is it for equipment, actors, festivals or specific on set locations?

Also, why as a director, do you want to do this? Is it to raise awareness on an issue? Do you want to have a social impact? How will your story affect other people?

Again, this is all up to you, it’s the director’s vision, and everyone is unique in their own way. It’s your time to shed a light on the way you want to work and how you want to achieve your passion.

The director’s vision complements the writer’s script in a way that it become the script’s progression. It’s the next step towards the production of a film, the director’s blueprint, a map of sorts that can serve as a guideline for multiple reasons. And only the director’s statement can really let people know exactly how the script will be transferred from page to screen.

Your vision, if it’s been well thought out and thoroughly developed, will separate you from the competition and shine a spotlight on your potential. Remember, it’s the way a film is told that makes the story unique.